Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

In today's

society

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citizens consider that

money

plays an important role in

happiness

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the happiness

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of our life.

Yes

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money

is needed at every instance of our life from our birth to the day we die and from my point of view

i

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also

think

its

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it's

it is

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true that cash does affect the smiles on our

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. In the paragraph below

i

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I

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will elaborate my opinion for the same notion.

Firstly

, I think

their

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are more possibilities to dream and achieve big when we have enough funds.

For

example

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example,

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a study from a university in New York shows how most

of

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the

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apply

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middle class

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middle-class

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families spent half of their

lifes

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life

earnings

by

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apply

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paying

schools

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school

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and

colleges

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college

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tuition fees , loans and other grocery bills.

therefore

, all

this

creates pressure for us to do jobs we are not usually

intrested

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interested

in.

Secondly

, we all at

point

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some point

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feel to have

luxeries

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luxuries

in our life

such

as

big

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a big

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house, cars, and some situations enough

money

to travel around. Not necessarily for long terms but even for a

while

these materialistic things succeed at making us happy for a fact

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also

one of the reasons why getting gifts

make

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makes

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us happy.

To conclude

this

topic

i

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would like to share my personal relation with

money

and how at most times it brings me happiness in

forms

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the forms

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of new

cloths

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clothes

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and food

for instance

last

week

i

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was unhappy about something and my mom brought me patties from my favorite restaurant and that make me felt joy.