The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares the number of people who stay at a holiday resort in Australia across four regions, including Asia, Europe, the US and others, and the table gives detailed information about each region’s tourists.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that Western countries account for the most. Another striking feature is that European visitors stay longer than the remaining regions.
According to
the pie chart, a particular holiday resort in Australia is the most visited by Western countries. To be precise, 37% of tourists are Europeans,
this
proportion for the US is slightly lower, at 35%, both of these account for around three-quarters of the total.
By contrast
, a mere 10% of Asians choose that place as a destination for vacation, compared to 18% of other countries. Looking at the table,
it is clear that
the average length of stay is different among the four regions, American travellers spend 14 days staying there, double that of Asian people, with only 7 days.
In addition
, camping or caravan is the most popular accommodation in Europe and worldwide.
Finally
, Asian and American visitors prefer sightseeing,
while
Europeans enjoy swimming or bathing.
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