Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In
this
day and age, Linking Words
tourism
is the main contributor to some countries' economies. Some Use synonyms
people
believe that tourists should be banned to protect local culture and the Use synonyms
environment
, Use synonyms
while
others argue that it would be harmful to the economic growth of a country. From my perspective, I am convinced by the latter opinion, and Linking Words
this
essay will discuss both views and shall elaborate on the rationale.
On the one hand, it is inevitable that Linking Words
tourism
brings some Use synonyms
drawbacks
to local Use synonyms
people
and the Use synonyms
environment
. One of these Use synonyms
drawbacks
is that some Use synonyms
travelers
come from different parts of the world, so they cannot fully understand or respect local customs and practices. As an example of Change the spelling
travellers
this
point, those who live in tourist areas can be affected by travel activities Linking Words
such
as camping and sightseeing, which can disrupt their daily routine and the places that local Linking Words
people
need for farming. Another drawback is that Use synonyms
traveling
can harm the local Change the spelling
travelling
environment
Use synonyms
by
transportation and travel activities. Change preposition
through
Traveling
by bus, personal car, and motorbike releases a huge amount of carbon and fumes, contributing to local air pollution.
Change the spelling
Travelling
On the other hand
, Linking Words
although
there are some Linking Words
drawbacks
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
to
tourism
, these merits seem to outweigh the disadvantages. Use synonyms
Tourism
creates job opportunities for local Use synonyms
people
, decreasing the unemployment rate in tourist areas. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Linking Words
tourism
industry needs a variety of workers to serve as drivers, receptionists, and tour guides, all of which create well-paid jobs for local Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
tourism
helps enhance cultural exchange between countries and encourages local trade. Use synonyms
Travelers
are more likely to buy local products as souvenirs, and they Change the spelling
Travellers
also
bring to native residents cultures from different parts of the world, creating a culturally diverse Linking Words
environment
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, children in these tourist areas have better access to different types of cultures, which can help enhance their ability to communicate and adapt to new environments.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
Linking Words
tourism
can cause several disadvantages for local Use synonyms
people
and the Use synonyms
environment
, Use synonyms
such
as air pollution, the merits of cultural exchange and creating job opportunities from Linking Words
this
trend seem to outweigh the Linking Words
drawbacks
. From my point of view, I agree with the latter opinion, and it is necessary for the government to impose laws to limit the impact of Use synonyms
tourism
on the Use synonyms
environment
.Use synonyms
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