2.Most agree that we should be training children to recycle wastes to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. However, some believe that parents should teach their children to recycle waste while others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The name of my
city
is
Krasnodar
. It is the
southest
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center
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centre
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of
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the russian
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russian
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regions
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so
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the climat
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climat
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climate
here is hot and humid
especial
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in the summer. But the
automn
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autumn
and springtime are very warm and comfortable. There is snowing here usually just several times
for
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apply
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the
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a
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year. Architecture in
Krasnodar
doesn’t have
own
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its own
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style and system. There are many small
cotteges
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cottages
cottage
near the high
buldings
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buildings
. For the
big
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large
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quatity
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quantity
of small
houses
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houses,
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the
city
is so sprawling – about 30
killometres
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kilometres
amount different parts of the town. All official organizations are in the
center
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of
Krasnodar
so
this
part of
city
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the city
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is
awfull
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awful
awfully
congested. The air and the river in
Krasnodar
are polluted
for
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because of
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problems with canalization and cars. A lot of people from all
Russia
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over Russia
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move here because they guess that local life is easier. But
price
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the price
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on
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accommodation and
grossery
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grocery
is one of the most expensive in the country. Despite of
problems
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problems,
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Krasnodar
has some beautifull places:The park
Krasnodar
modern
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a modern
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and
amaizing
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amazing
point of the
city
, The Japanese garden –
new
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a new
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location with
bizzare
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bizarre
trees, The Botanic garden –
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a quite
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quite
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quiet
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and calm place
fo
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to
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relax, The Krasnaya
street
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– vibrant territory popular among artists and young people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling
  • Natural resources
  • Preserve
  • Waste management
  • Environmental responsibility
  • Sustainability
  • Habits
  • Eco-friendly
  • Role modeling
  • Lifelong behaviors
  • Structured education
  • Curriculum integration
  • Critical thinking
  • Ecological awareness
  • Collaborative learning
  • Systematic approach
  • Reinforcement
  • Community involvement
  • Governmental initiatives
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