The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.

The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.
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The chart below depicts the differences in international student count for two consecutive
years
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2019 and 2020 in Australia. The unit is denoted by thousands.
Overall
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, we can see from the graph that Chinese and Indian
students
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accounted for the highest
number
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of international
students
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who attended schools in Australia
whereas
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the other four nationalities remained at almost the same
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for 2
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.
According to
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the data, there were nearly 20 000 Chinese
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in 2019 more than in 2020
while
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there was an opposition in Indian
students
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shown by the higher
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of student count in 2020 than in 2019, 108 049 compared with 92 024
students
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. In terms of Nepal school attendants, both
years
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had almost the same figure but the count in 2020 was slightly 4000 more than that in 2019.
In addition
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, Vietnam, Brazil and Malaysia had the smallest
number
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of
students
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who studied in Australia in comparison with the other three previous regions.
However
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, we can see that their figures marginally remained the same during 2
years
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.
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