The charts below give information about the world's top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
milk
, cheese, butter, and milk
powder produced in different countries in 2012.
In general, it is noticeable that the amount of EU
produced is the highest, while
the opposite was true for the United State
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States
In addition
, Milk
seems to be the most produced by all countries.
In 2012, the figure for EU produced
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EU-produced
milk
was 142,970, followed by India and the United State
which stood at 127,000 and 90,038 respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
States
Besides
that, the figure for Cheese produced by Brazil was only 700, while
EU
produced 7,120 tons Correct article usage
the EU
Cheese
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of Cheese
higher
than that of the United St about 3,000.
In terms of butter producers in 2012, India was produced 4,500 which higher Add a missing verb
is higher
twice
than those in Rephrase
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the Eu
Eu
. The United Correct your spelling
EU
State
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was
produced only 800 butters. Meanwhile, 1,200 was the figure for Unnecessary verb
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Milk
Powder which was produced in China, while
than
that in Change preposition
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EU
and New Zealand was 770 and 1,110 respectively.Correct article usage
the EU
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