Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should government give more financial support to local film industries?

Despite different types of internal

films

that are produced even by professional directors; generally, people prefer to watch foreign ones.

Although

, it has numerous reasons

such

as restrictions which are applied, including financial issues; so, I think

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should do more

supports

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including monetary

aids

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to progress the native film

industry

. During the

last

few decades,

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industry

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become one of the most popular hobbies all over the world

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genres that provide a huge variety of choices for audiences.

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international

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movie

industry

grows domestic directors

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to produce

films

to be considered by critics.

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, despite

of

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their efforts spectators still prefer those foreign language

films

. I conjecture that it has many causes

such

as

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, decoration of the scene, special effects and

finally

actors and actresses.

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, the “

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of the Caribbean” is one of the most electrifying and booming movies which has been sold

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than four billion dollars.

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and extraordinary special effects

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caused many people

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all around the globe

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absorbed

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.

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, these factors demand a substantial pecuniary source.

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proficient directing and the alluring stories of home

films

; they are not able to be box-office hit and it is owing to their circumscribed budget. In my opinion,

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should dedicate higher

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as an encouragement. It obviously increases

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the quality

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of the movie

industry

and

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its ranking;

as a result

, they become bestselling so

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they make a big enormous profit. In conclusion, I admit that devoting colossal means

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the government could be regarded as an investment. In

the

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other words, If the authority tries to cooperate the headway of the entertainment

industry

absorb more people to home

films

and

finally

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it could be highly advantageous to

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the economy

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of the country.