A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Maria, I hope you are doing well. Anyway, I'm writing you

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letter regarding the

favor

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I asked you

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week, to take care of my house and Leka, my lovely dog,

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camping on holiday. I will take my cellphone with me, and you can call me whenever you want, or if you prefer, you could just leave a message on my Instagram, I'm always online. My wife will bring her mobile too, so if you have any problem

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contacting me, you can call her as well. Please, don't forget the medicine of Leka once a day, the box is over the

livingroom

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table. You can take Leka for a

walking

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in the morning, I think

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is the best time to walk with our pets in my neighbourhood. The plants

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need some care, twice a day you have to put some water on them. Don't worry about cleaning the garden, just make sure the windows of our bedroom are closed. Thank you very much for your great help. Best regards, Lucas

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coherence cohesion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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