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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Waste
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production
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 and
management
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 have been a cause of concern globally. These days there has been a significant increase in the amount of
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.
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 essay will discuss why
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 might be the case and how the problem could be alleviated. The reasons for the phenomenal increase in the
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 of garbage seem to be simple. In the first instance, the population growth all over the world is been increasing, which is directly related to household
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 material
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 being produced.
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 of
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 landfill areas are facing issues when managing the amount of
waste
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 deposited. Governments all over the world might combine the statistical population growth vs
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production
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 to establish new landfill areas for easier
waste
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 process
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 in the future.
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, reorganise the collection's schedule as a part of the solution and combine it with a reduction plan in taxes for those companies in charge of
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 collection.
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, collection centres and recycling programs would be implemented as a part of social responsibility for
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 disposal. Another fundamental reason that contributes to
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production
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 is industrialisation,
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 its productive process has changed over time, in
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 era the vast majority are based on a 24/7 well-known process.
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, industrial
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 is increasing total
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production
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. In regard to
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 matter, the government should implement policies that help to control the amount of industrial
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 and implement fees for those industries that exceed the limit permitted including compulsory recycling programs on-site to avoid overloading those recycling centres in the future. In conclusion,
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management
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 should be controlled and under legislative clauses for governments all over the world to diminish and keep under control the
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 produced by the population and industries.
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, government
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 tactics and policies will lead to a reduction in
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production
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 in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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