1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake

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Hi James, I hope

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message finds you well, sorry for not replying to your

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email I was busy with my semester exams. I am delighted that you have agreed to look after my house and pet during my holiday trip.

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, do not hesitate to contact me if you have any doubts or need any information. I am reachable on +1 647 673 9374.

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, I want to inform you about my Pet "Dog", every day at 7 Am take him for a morning walk. Feed him food 3 times a day and keep a bowl of water and biscuits for him at night.

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, regarding the household work, do watering for plants in the garden. Make sure to keep food waste in front of the house so that it can be collected by the Municipal waste management team.

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, switch off all the lights and fans before going to bed. Thank you for your support in taking care of my pet and house. see you soon. Regards, Joe.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Use appropriate greeting and closing expressions to establish a friendly and polite tone in the letter.

task response

Provide additional details related to the household duties and include specific instructions for each task to ensure a complete response to the task prompt.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical resource of the letter.

grammatical range

Try to vary the sentence structures and use a wider range of grammatical structures to improve the grammatical range of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?