You visit a sports centre regularly, and there is a problem with the changing rooms in it. You have complained about it several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter, describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last time you complained explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Lovejit Singh and a daily visitor to the fitness club, I joined here six months ago but the service is getting lower day by day. Today, I am writing
this
letter to shed light on the conditions of changing rooms in our sports centre.
Firstly
, some doors and windows are broken, those are unable to be locked and we face difficulty while
changing clothes. In addition
, the locks of some personal lockers are not working so where we put our belongings. Last
week, another man used my locker as I was unable to lock it.
Moreover
, I already told my views about the cleaning and broken doors to the staff members of the fitness club. They said they would fix it soon and also
asked the cleaner to clean the rooms properly but no improvement could be seen.
Furthermore
, I request you to take action immediately as it is a reputed recreation centre in our area. I believe you will fix the broken things this
week, and I really appreciate this
.
Yours Faithfully,
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