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Online games are becoming more and more popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online games?

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There is a tendency to play
games
 online and it is more popular among people nowadays. Playing online
games
 has not only disadvantages but
also
 advantages. On the
one
 hand, it could enhance brain development and allow entertainment
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also
.
On the other hand
, it can be a cause for new health problems and addiction may be a reason to make an impairment in daily
activities
. Through
this
 essay above topics will be discussed in depth.
Firstly
, internet game
activities
 are blended with a number of
activities
 which can help to improve cognitive development. Most of them use numeric calculations and
hence
 it affects directly
one
's brain improvement. Not only that it can be used as a leisure
time
 activity as it is not boring and makes pleasure by achieving the game step by step.
For instance
one
 of my colleagues, who was not good at mathematics at school age, now able to solve math problems in mind within a short
time
 period. The reason may be he is playing advanced
computer
games
 as a hobby. Even though
,
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 it has beneficial outcomes, drawbacks
also
 can be seen. Spending a considerable
time
 in front of a screen may affect
on
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one
's vision and
therefore
, parents are advised to limit the screen
time
 of children to protect their eyes from serious vision impairment problems. Attractive user surfaces
also
 gradually increase the willingness to play
games
. Even though
computer
games
 are considered hobbies these types of
activities
 can harm people's daily
activities
 and the education of children
also
. Because most of the children spend too much
time
 on
computer
 entertainment
activities
 per day unknowingly.
One
 of my co-workers had to use spectacles after using computers for several hours daily and now he is on follow-up for eye treatments.
To sum up
, most people are playing
computer
games
 at present and it has both pros and cons as it may affect health directly and even if it is responsible for brain development
also
.
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