The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
The graph shows the distribution of
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Britain
having
five portions of fruits and vegetables a day in England for the past eight Wrong verb form
had
years
, from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
women, who able
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then
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men
and children
all the reporting period. And for all the categories, the number of people who achived
the intake portion has Correct your spelling
achieved
an
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increase
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increased
year
2001 to the max of 2006 and then
drop
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dropped
last
two consistive
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consecutive
years
.
In all three groups, women is
the Change the verb form
are
most
population. It had just above 20 per Correct word choice
largest
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cent
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the year
a year
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apply
cert
, 6 Correct your spelling
cent
years
later. Afterward
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number of
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apply
population
went down back to 30 per Add an article
the population
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in the Correct your spelling
cent
year
of
2008.
The trend of Change preposition
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children
and men
is similar to women. However
, when comparing between
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children
and men
, the difference between these two genders kept in
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at
years
, After reaching Correct article usage
the maxium
maxium
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maximum
at
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year
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the year
a year
of
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apply
children
and men
, the gap between these two group
of gender reduced and with very small Change to a plural noun
groups
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