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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
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The two diagrams illustrate how a bookstore has changed since 2000.
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, the stationery store has undergone a number of dramatic changes, the most of which is the movement of the position of some categories of
books
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 and the development of amenities catering for reading needs on the spot. The north-west of the bookshop witnessed significant changes, with the fiction
area
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 being divided and adding other categories of
books
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. There used to be art, hobbies and cookery
book
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 rows in the centre, but it was
then
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 redeveloped into a reading
book
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area
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 with four tables and benches. In the northeast, the fiction
book
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area
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 was converted into the non-fiction
book
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area
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,
while
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 the old non-fiction
book
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 section was replaced by a coffee shop in the southeast, where parents could wait for their children and chat with others.
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, to the west of the coffee shop, the space for travel, new
books
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 and service
books
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 has remained unchanged over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, area, book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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