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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
men
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 and
women
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 who taught six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
Overall
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, the highest and lowest rate belongs to
women
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 and
men
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 who
work
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 in Nursery
school
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 respectively. Most of the
women
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 preferred to
work
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 in Nursery
school
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 and primary
school
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 and the percentage of both of them reached just under 95%.
By contrast
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, the rate of
men
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 who want to
work
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 for a nursery and primary
school
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 sat at just under 10%.
In addition
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, the percentage of
men
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 and
women
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 who worked as a teacher in college was the same and stood at almost 50%.
Furthermore
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, working in a private training institute is more popular than a secondary
school
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 for males but at the same time, females wanted to
work
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 as a teacher in secondary
school
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.
Finally
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, the most important educational setting for
men
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 was university and the rate of
men
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 who were hired for university sat at 70% approximately.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, work, school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • educational settings
  • primary
  • secondary
  • tertiary
  • adult education
  • vocational training
  • private tutoring
  • disparity
  • dominate
  • majority
  • minority
  • gender distribution
  • workforce
  • trend
  • ratio
  • comparative analysis
  • significant difference
  • visual representation
  • data interpretation
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