The following is a line graph showing the increase and decrease in wildlife population especially animals like bears, dolphins and whales through the years 2017 to 2022.

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The line graph gives detailed information about how many wildlife populations developed in the space of six years.(2017-2022) In general, it is evident that bears became the leader
at the end
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dolphins were the dominant figure beginning of the
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,it is worth noting that whales virtually remained unchanged over the
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. In detail, bears represented about 5 in 2017 in the initial point.
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, after five years it has witnessed a gradual increase to around 140.
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that,
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figure continued to rise and reached roughly 180 in 2022.
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, the dolphins' number was about 160 and
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it witnessed a fall to 40 from 2017 to 2019. Interestingly,
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figure showed a reverse trend than bears. Following that, it did not stop declining and disappeared entirely in 2022. Focusing on whales, after decreasing slightly to 60 in 2018, it rose to about 100 in 2019.
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, it virtually stood steady despite some fluctuations until the end of the
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but not least, whales marked about a 10 decrease from the initial point,mainly it was 70 in 2022.
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