You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The picture illustrates the process of recycling the
waste
of the organics to make the garden fertilizer.
Overall
, the process takes alot
of months to produce. Correct your spelling
a lot
Additionally
, the main design of the plastic container
have
small holes to provide air inside the Change the verb form
has
container
. The waste
could be newspaper or
grass or even food.
The plastic Correct word choice
apply
container
have
holes which can be used to let the air flow inside the Change the verb form
has
container
. Firstly
, the waste
can be placed inside the
Correct article usage
a
container
with 15
cm length Correct article usage
a 15
in
each type of Change preposition
for
waste
. The waste
types could be newspaper or
grass or food. Correct word choice
apply
Secondly
, water can be poured in
the Change preposition
into
container
along with
nitrogen. Thirdly
, the container
will be covered from the top to let the air flow only from the sides. Moreover
, the heat of the hot water will flow out the
Change preposition
of the
container
.
Lastly
, after 6 months the waste
will be compost
and Wrong verb form
composted
then
it can be provided into gardens as fertilizer.Submitted by ibrakh80 on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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