The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the process of recycling the
waste
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of the organics to make the garden fertilizer.
Overall
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, the process takes
alot
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a lot
of months to produce.
Additionally
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, the main design of the plastic
container
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have
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small holes to provide air inside the
container
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. The
waste
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could be newspaper
or
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apply
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grass or even food. The plastic
container
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have
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has
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holes which can be used to let the air flow inside the
container
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.
Firstly
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, the
waste
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can be placed inside
the
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a
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container
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with
15
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a 15
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cm length
in
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for
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each type of
waste
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. The
waste
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types could be newspaper
or
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apply
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grass or food.
Secondly
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, water can be poured
in
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into
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the
container
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along with
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nitrogen.
Thirdly
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, the
container
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will be covered from the top to let the air flow only from the sides.
Moreover
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, the heat of the hot water will flow out
the
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of the
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container
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.
Lastly
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, after 6 months the
waste
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will be
compost
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composted
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and
then
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it can be provided into gardens as fertilizer.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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