Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is good for the

poorer

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,

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if the state

ought to pay

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pays

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for

them

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public

transport

,

however

,

government

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the government

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also

need capital to repair and reconstruct roads and railways.

Therefore

, personally, I agree that mass transit should be free to the users. First of all, some

people

cannot afford to fund bus

fare

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in their lives

such

as non-workers, old

people

and the

deprrived

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deprived

.Those humans will

be benefited

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and feel comfortable if a nation

allow

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allows

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them to use

busline

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the line

without paying.

Furthermore

, some workers in

government

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the government

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sector

received

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less

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lower

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wages, so they will be unable to pay for the city metro because they have to support their families.

This

is an advantage to them when the administration

make

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it non-payable to public

transport

.To give a clear example, in some remote areas, old

people

spending

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the whole

days

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at their homes without working so they cannot find money to pay for trams or commuter omnibuses.

On the other hand

, most governments in the world investing towards public

transport

and those funds should be used

repairing

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for repairing

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and reconstruction activities in cities.

This

means that, if passengers pay

such

amount

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, the authority will earn money and keep it for

driver's

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the driver's

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salaries

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.Trams and buses

also

demands

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attention almost

in

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every two or three weeks, since the engines run

everyday

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servicing is a proper way to stay away from

breakdown

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.It

wold

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be a wiser idea if persons

give

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something after using

trains

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the trains

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so that the railway line will remain in good

ondition

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condition

due to

frequent service.An example to illustrate that would be my native country,

the

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regime got cash from the commuters and

using

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used

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it to buy

electrical

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buses and

constructing

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construct

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new highways.

As a result

of

this

, many towns in my country

using

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better

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transport

system and

also

a lot of improvements

is

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achieved.

To conclude

, many human beings will

benefited

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benefit

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if the state

make

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makes

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it free for public

transport

especially

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to

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for

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the poor

people

and older

once

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ones

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.Personally, I agree with the statement above,

however

, funds from fare payers will help to create development in cities.