The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below illustrates the linear manmade process of creating a garden fertilizer made of organic
wastes
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.
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, the process includes several stages with a long duration at the
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one. In the beginning, the plastic
container
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is taken with a large volume constituting
to
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apply
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2m3. The body of the
container
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has
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some holes at an equal distance from each other to allow the air to get in.
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there is a sequence of numerous organic wastes which should be put at the bottom of the
container
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. The initial 30cm is filled by the mix consisting of food, grass, newspaper and some other wastes at the top of it. The third step of the production is adding a chemical
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as nitrogen and water, which temperature is only allowed to be hot enough. Afterwards, the throat of the
container
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has to be covered by a lid and heated up.
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the 6 months will have lasted the compost will be
finally
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formed and be ready for garden usage.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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