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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
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The
line
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chart
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 provides information about
consumption
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the consumption
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 of
energy
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 in the USA over a
50-year-period
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50-year period
, between 1980 and 2030.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the data for nuclear and coal experience
gradual
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a gradual
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decrese
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decrease
,
while
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 other types are predicted to have some fluctuations.
Besides
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 that, it is evident that petrol and oil showed the highest use of
energy
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 in the entire period. Having a detailed look at the
line
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chart
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, it is visible that nuclear,
hydropower
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, solar and
wind
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 had started from the same point which is almost 4
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 in 1980.
However
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, nuclear
energy
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 increased reaching around 9
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 and
maintain
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maintaining
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 the highest position among
hydropower
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 and solar/
wind
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energy
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 in 2030. It is crystal clear that at the beginning
hydropower
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was
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outraced solar/
wind
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 in 1995,
then
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 witnessed
decline
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the decline
a decline
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 and in 2005 increased to the same level as solar/
wind
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 over a 10-year-period,
finnaly
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finally
 solar/
wind
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 outraced
hydropower
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 by almost 2
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 during the
remain
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remaining
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 period.
According to
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 the
line
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chart
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, it is noticeable that coal and natural gas were 16 and 20
intially
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initially
 and
then
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 anticipated for coal to rise almost by 12
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 and exceed natural gas in 2020. As is presented in the
line
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chart
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, it is
undenible
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undeniable
 that petrol and oil were the highest
energy
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 consumers
being
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apply
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with 35
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 and reaching 42
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uadrillion
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quadrillion
units
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 in 2005 and witnessed
steady
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a steady
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 increase from 2005 to 2020 and
forecated
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forecasted
 to increase throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, chart, energy, hydropower, wind, uadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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