The chart below shows the change in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
the chart gives us information about the changes in the three places of three gradual rise during the period 2008 to 2012 .
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burglary ,car theft and robbery in Fix the agreement mistake
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Overall
overall
it can be seen that the rate of car theft was
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that stood at around 3300 in 2003 which was the highest number of commit crime
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2012 .
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