The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
The chart illustrates the proportion of renewable
energy
in total energy
supply in four distinct countries in the year
1997, 2000, and 2010.
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years
Overall
, it is evident that Iceland relied on renewable energy
the most among the four countries in all the three years measured, followed by Turkey. In contrast
, the portions of renewable energy
in Australia and Sweden ranked lowest across the period.
Iceland saw a steady increase in the domestic supply of renewable energy
; the figure
for its share of total energy
in 1997 started at 45%, increasing to 60% in 2000, and further
rose to 70% in 2010. Meanwhile, the figure
for Turkey fluctuated over the course; the figure
standing at just below 40% in 1997 slightly climbed to just above 40% in 2000, but moderately reduced to around 32% in 2010.
By contrast
, Australia and Sweden produced the least amount of renewable energy
. In Australia, the figure
started at around 9% in 1997 and gradually dropped every year, reaching 4% in 2010. On the other hand
, Sweden saw a slight but continuous gowth
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growth
energy
throughout; its 1997 figure
of 5% almost doubled in 2010.Submitted by doable on
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