The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of renewable
energy
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in total
energy
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supply in four distinct countries in the
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1997, 2000, and 2010.
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, it is evident that Iceland relied on renewable
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the most among the four countries in all the three years measured, followed by Turkey.
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, the portions of renewable
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in Australia and Sweden ranked lowest across the period. Iceland saw a steady increase in the domestic supply of renewable
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; the
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for its share of total
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in 1997 started at 45%, increasing to 60% in 2000, and
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rose to 70% in 2010. Meanwhile, the
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for Turkey fluctuated over the course; the
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standing at just below 40% in 1997 slightly climbed to just above 40% in 2000, but moderately reduced to around 32% in 2010.
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, Australia and Sweden produced the least amount of renewable
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. In Australia, the
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started at around 9% in 1997 and gradually dropped every year, reaching 4% in 2010.
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, Sweden saw a slight but continuous
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growth
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throughout; its 1997
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of 5% almost doubled in 2010.
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  • proportion
  • renewable energy
  • total energy supply
  • percentage
  • overall
  • changed
  • increases
  • decreases
  • fluctuating
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • commitment
  • sustainability
  • environmental protection
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