The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie chart illustrates the portion of three
nutrients
in normal meals of people in USA. The reported nutrients
are sodium
, saturated fats
and added sugars, all of which have bad effects on body
if consumed in high Add an article
the body
amount
.
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Overall
, breakfast
and snacks
contain amounts of sodium
. In addition
, breakfast
contains these unhealthy nutrients
the least. Dinner has the largest share in sodium
and saturated fats
, whereas
snacks
have the biggest portion in added sugar.
For sodium
and saturated fats
, dinner contains these nutrients
the most respectively at 43 and 37 per cent
. Furthermore
, breakfast
has the least share in both of the nutrients
at 14 per cent
for sodium
and 16 per cent
for saturated fats
. Additionally
, for sodium
, there is one more meal that has the least share which is snacks
.
Among all the reported meals, snacks
have the most portion of added sugar at 42 per cent
whilst breakfast
has the least amount of added sugar, reported as 16 per cent
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