You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The diagram intricately delineates the systematic utilization of organic waste to yield nutrient-rich compost tailored for agricultural purposes.
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a holistic perspective, the creation of garden fertilizer unfolds through a streamlined sequence encompassing five discernible stages, each contributing to the refinement of the end product. As elucidated in the visual representation, the inaugural phase mandates the provision of a capacious 2 m^3 plastic receptacle, designed to facilitate optimal air circulation. Subsequent to
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, a blend of organic residues, comprising newspaper, grass, and food waste, is meticulously introduced into the container, reaching a pinnacle at 30
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in height. The subsequent stage witnesses the simultaneous infusion of nitrogen and hot water into the receptacle, followed by
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hermetic sealing, allowing for the expulsion of heat and
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. The denouement materializes when the finalized compost descends to the container's base, marking its readiness for dissemination to agricultural outlets. In essence,
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illustrative portrayal underscores an eco-conscious paradigm, showcasing the metamorphosis of organic refuse into a potent agricultural adjunct, realized through a well-defined progression of stages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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