You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.
Dear Sajana,
I am Sandeep
kaur
, living in flat block number 456 Change the capitalization
Kaur
from
Change preposition
for
last
2 years. I am writing Correct article usage
the last
letter
to complain you about my neighbour block number 455. Add an article
a letter
Due to
Correct article usage
the lost
lost
of noise, I cannot concentrate on my study.
Replace the word
loss
Firstly
, They are playing
loud music all day even Wrong verb form
play
untill
midnight. Correct your spelling
until
Last
night, before going to bed I request
to slow it down. Today, they disappointed me with more loud systems. Wrong verb form
requested
I
unable to Add a verb
I am
I was
fous
on my exam preparations. Correct your spelling
focus
This
is month
Correct article usage
the month
exams
, I am a Change preposition
of exams
final year
student Add a hyphen
final-year
in
Brock University. My final terms are next week, Change preposition
at
with
Correct word choice
and with
this
environment
I could Add a comma
environment,
be failed
. These tests are necessary for me to get admission Wrong verb form
fail
in
Change preposition
to
abroad
University. Correct article usage
a abroad
Secondly
, after might night they laugh loud
because their friends Rephrase
loudly
vist
late Correct your spelling
visit
night
. It is Change preposition
at night
rule
of flat no one can stay after 12.00 pm. They are breaking Add an article
the rule
a rule
this
regulation too.
I request that inform them about my exams and rules. This
will be great if you help me to solve problem
. Add an article
the problem
a problem
This
matter needs your immediate attention so that it does not escalate further
.
Hoping for prompt
reply from your side.
Add an article
a prompt
Your
sincerely.
SandeepReplace the word
You're
You are
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task response
Ensure that the letter is completely focused on the task prompt and includes all necessary elements such as an explicit explanation of the situation, the effects on you, and a clear suggestion for the landlord.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of the letter to create a better flow of ideas and information. Use appropriate paragraph divisions and clear transitions between ideas.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more accurate word choices to express ideas more effectively and precisely. Avoid repetition of words and phrases.
grammatical range
Work on achieving greater grammatical accuracy, including sentence structure, verb tenses, and punctuation. Proofread the letter for grammatical errors and revise as necessary.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
