You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The image provides information about
the
recycling organic food to garden fertilizer.
First of all, we need a plastic container which has holes Correct article usage
apply
on
it so that air can flow. For the next step, food will be put at the bottom to Change preposition
in
the
height of 15cm. Correct article usage
a
Then
grass and newspapper
needed to be above the food respectively, and the waste Correct your spelling
newspaper
newspapers
can
Wrong verb form
could
be hold
Change the verb form
be held
above all
of them.
for the third step, nitrogen and hot water should be given to the container. Heat is the crucial element of fourth
step, and after six months Change the article
the fourth
the
all the Correct article usage
apply
wastes
will turn Fix the agreement mistake
waste
to
Change preposition
into
the
compost.Correct article usage
apply
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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