The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the
price
of three metals changed monthly in 2014. Compared to the proceeding months.
Overall
, the metals saw an increase in the first and the end months of the year. However
, nickel showed more fluctuations in comparison with other metals.
As can be seen, the price
of nickel in January increased dramatically and stood at 6%. Then
, it saw an increase precipitously, which in June reached -3% and made of the lowest price
during the year. Albeit, after some fluctuations, it stood at 1% by December.
Furthermore
, the price
of zinc in February reached 3 percent
, which was its peak. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, it experienced a stable decrease and, in May reached -1%. Besides
, the price
of copper also
showed the same trend from January to May, but it was temporary and, after hovering for several months, it increased by 2 percent
in December which had an insignificant difference from the Change the spelling
per cent
price
of zinc.Submitted by matty.ebadii on
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