The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The diagram chart depicts the percentages of seven reasons
of
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for
adults
in education
, while
the pie chart gives the proportion of how three different adults
people thinks
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think
of
their Change preposition
apply
cost
of education
should be shared. Generally, most of
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apply
adults
have the intention in
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of
education
because they are interest
in Change the verb form
are interested
subject
more than Correct article usage
the subject
to meet
people. Meanwhile, the individual more consider sharing their Change preposition
in meeting
cost
of study than taxpayer
.
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the taxpayer
a taxpayer
Initially
, the interest in subject
Correct article usage
the subject
catch
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catches
adults
motivation in Change noun form
adults'
adult's
education
that has 40% which is the highest number of survey
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the survey
a survey
if
reasons. Correct word choice
apply
Then
it was followed by to gain qualifications at 38%. Helpful for current
job which is the next reason for Add an article
a current
the current
adults
to continue their study is in 22%, while
to improve prospect
of promotion, and enjoy learning/studying have the same proportions at 20%. Add an article
the prospect
Additionally
, to be able to change job
and to meet people has the lowest percentages of reasons for grown person (12% and 9% respectively).
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jobs
Next,
individual
is the highest part in choosing Add an article
the individual
an individual
cost
of each course that should be Add an article
the cost
pay
(40%). Wrong verb form
paid
Then
Employer
is the next one who intends to do the Correct article usage
the Employer
cost sharing
which had 35%. Yet, there is just 25% of Add a hyphen
cost-sharing
Taxpayer
who want to share the Fix the agreement mistake
Taxpayers
cost
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, education, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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