the line graph below shows changes in the a mount and type of fast food consumed by australian teenagers from 1975 to 20000

the line graph below shows changes in the a mount and type of fast food consumed by australian teenagers from 1975 to 20000
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the changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by
autralian
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Australian
teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
Consuption
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Consumption
of
handburgers
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hamburgers
and pizza
have
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increased from the
year
1975 to 2000 . We could
also
see
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downfall of
fish
and
chips
in the
autralian
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Australian
market
.
Fish
and
chips
were
rulling
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ruling
pulling
the fast food
market
in the
year
1975. The were
abot
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about
100
number of
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times
were
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eaten per
year
,In the
year
1980 the
fish
and
chips
market
were
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equal to
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the hamburgers
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hamburgers
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hamburger
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market
. Australian people started to consume
hamburgs
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hamburgers
Hamburg
from 15 to 95 , the growth was
incredeble
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incredible
.By the
year
2000
hamburgs
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hamburgers
market
started to rule
fast
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the fast
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food
market
. On the other side
the
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pizza
consuption
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consumption
was rising in silence, It was less than 5 in the
year
1975 but it
had
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reached
to
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82 in the
year
2000. In the
year
1990
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1990,
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the
both
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fish
and chip
market
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markets
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were equal to
pizza
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the pizza
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market
.
Fish
and
chips
mrket
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market
has just about 39 in the
year
2000
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