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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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The world that we live in today is dominated by advertising.
Adverts
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 are on television, on the World Wide Web,
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 the street and even on our mobile phones.
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, many of the strategies used to sell a product or service can be considered immoral or unacceptable.
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 with, the fact that we cannot escape from advertising is a significant cause for complaint. Constant images and signs wherever we look can be very intrusive and irritating at times. Take
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 advertising on the mobile phone. With the latest
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 mobile companies are now able to send advertising messages via SMS to consumers' phones whenever they choose.
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 we expect
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 in numerous situations, it now seems that there are very few places we can actually avoid them. A
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 aspect of advertising that I would consider unethical is the way that it encourages people to buy
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 they may not need or cannot afford. Children and young people
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 are influenced by
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 showing the latest toys, clothing or music and
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 can put enormous pressure on the parents to buy these
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.
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, the advertising of tobacco
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 and alcohol has long been a controversial issue, but cigarette
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 have only recently been banned in many countries. It is quite possible that alcohol
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 encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking, yet restrictions have not been placed on
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 type of advertising in the same way as smoking. It is certainly true to say that advertising is an everyday feature of our lives.
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, people are constantly being encouraged to buy
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 or services that might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy. In conclusion, many aspects of advertising do appear to be morally wrong and are not acceptable in today's society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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