When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is very common for people to confuse success with popularity or wealth. In my opinion,

hard-working

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populace who

also

display

the

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unyielding attitude towards their ultimate aim,

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most likely to be unfazed in challenging times and pursue with

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enthusiasm for their

goals

. The most high achievers demonstrate traits

such

as

hardwork

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hard work

and persistence.

Although

it is true that success may come easy to a few luckier ones, the majority of successful people expend a lot of

efforts

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and time to accomplish their

goals

.

For example

, in

order

to rise to the rank of a celebrated chef, Gordon

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has confessed to

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100 hours a week in the fledgling days of his career.

Moreover

, people often quit on their dreams

due to

a lack of willpower to survive in adverse situations;

therefore

,

this

mandates a person to demonstrate relentlessness in

order

to prevail in his

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. The devotion to one's targets and tenacious

efforts

are the most important factors to succeed in

this

world. Working tirelessly ensures enough practice and the experience which is necessitated in

order

to gain any expertise.

For example

, a typical graduate needs many years of

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stellar performance and work experience in

order

to become the CEO of a company. These higher positions are highly competitive and impart a sense of accomplishment among those who exhibit the mettle to thrive in their

endeavors

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.

Furthermore

,

such

individuals do not succumb to pressure

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and display an unwavering focus and continue their relentless

efforts

to accomplish their

goals

.

This

greatly

increase

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their odds of attaining success. In conclusion,

surving

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surviving

and thriving in one's pursuit are the most important attributes of successful

personalities

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personality

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; which necessitates not only enormous

efforts

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but

also

a

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persistence in

order

to chase down

their

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goals

that, are set by an individual.