The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year.
The bar chart compares the figure of employed Australians in terms of work type and sex in the previous year.
Overall
, among the seven job categories, Clerical and Tradespeople were among the highest job preference
by Australians Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
last
year. It is noticeable that in most of the given work industries, more men
were working compared to women.
It is clear that
clerical jobs were most famous in Australia, it is accounted for the highest number of workers in female
at almost 1000, and Fix the agreement mistake
females
second
highest figure in Add an article
the second
men
at roughly 880. While
most of the Australian men
were into trading last
year (900), exactly 400 were working as laborers
.
Looking closely at the details, there was a huge difference between Change the spelling
labourers
men
and women working in managerial, trade market, and production positions in Australia. Perhaps trading saw the most significant gap, the figure of female trader
was eight Fix the agreement mistake
traders
time
smaller than that of male traders, 100 and 900 respectively. Change to a plural noun
times
While
managerial
position was twofold higher in Add an article
the managerial
men
at 600, about 550 men
were in production companies and female
were just 100. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Furthermore
, the number of Australians who worked as professionals were
almost similar with 650 males and 700 females.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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