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The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year.
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The bar chart compares the figure of employed Australians in terms of work type and sex in the previous year.
Overall
, among the seven job categories, Clerical and Tradespeople were among the highest job
preference
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 by Australians
last
 year. It is noticeable that in most of the given work industries, more
men
 were working compared to women.
It is clear that
 clerical jobs were most famous in Australia, it is accounted for the highest number of workers in
female
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 at almost 1000, and
second
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 highest figure in
men
 at roughly 880.
While
 most of the Australian
men
 were into trading
last
 year (900), exactly 400 were working as
laborers
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. Looking closely at the details, there was a huge difference between
men
 and women working in managerial, trade market, and production positions in Australia. Perhaps trading saw the most significant gap, the figure of female
trader
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traders
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 was eight
time
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 smaller than that of male traders, 100 and 900 respectively.
While
managerial
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 position was twofold higher in
men
 at 600, about 550
men
 were in production companies and
female
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females
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 were just 100.
Furthermore
, the number of Australians who worked as professionals
were
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 almost similar with 650 males and 700 females.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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