Some people say that schools should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parents should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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children

in public

especially

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in

school

were

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apply

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playing

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play

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a

phone

for

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on

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any

occasions

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occasion

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such

as playing games, watching videos on the internet, or just scrolling social media,

while

the

school

actually not

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the students to borrow their

phone

when in study time at

school

because infrequently, the

children

have a less of concentration if they are using too much screen time during the

school

day. Over the course of the years, most people mainly

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parents enriched by the information that appear in any sources

such

as newspaper, magazine, brochure, and particularly

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the internet

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internet

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. Some

of

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authors tell them in their papers that appear on either blogs or social media about how

phone

plays an important role

to influences

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in influencing

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children

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children's

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habit nowadays and how

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phone

can affect their

children

's behaviour. As can be seen, not all content creators have a good way

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influencing their

viewer

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viewers

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especially

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the

children

. Some

children

may follow a bad thing

instead

of a good one if they have no parental guidance in using

phone

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wisely. But, maybe the

phone

is one of some tools that they claim as a thing that

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a function as their stress reliever. So based on that, I hold the same opinion

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others that believe

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children

should be allowed to use

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the phone

a phone

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phone

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, but I think the parents still have an important role to give any barriers to them.

For instance

, the

children

would be allowed to use the

phone

while

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when

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it is not a

school

day and when

the

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they

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school

day their parents should be rigour to their

children

to follow the rules.