Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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as playing games, watching videos on the internet, or just scrolling social media,

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students to borrow their

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have a less of concentration if they are using too much screen time during the

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parents enriched by the information that appear in any sources

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as newspaper, magazine, brochure, and particularly

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the internet

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authors tell them in their papers that appear on either blogs or social media about how

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plays an important role

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habit nowadays and how

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can affect their

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's behaviour. As can be seen, not all content creators have a good way

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influencing their

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may follow a bad thing

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of a good one if they have no parental guidance in using

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wisely. But, maybe the

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is one of some tools that they claim as a thing that

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a function as their stress reliever. So, based on that I hold the same opinion

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others that believe

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should be allowed to use

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the phone

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, but I think the parents still have an important role to give any barriers to them.

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would be allowed to use the

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it is not a

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day and when

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day their parents should be rigour to their

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to follow the rules.