More and more wild animals are on the verge of the extinction and others are on the endagered list. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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around the

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warming phenomenon that makes animals

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their habitat and leads to become

endagered

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endangered

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not taken seriously,

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endagered

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endangered

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period of time.

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endagered

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endangered

and extinct animal increase each year.

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on severe

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polar bear

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their habitat.

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impacted

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climate uncertainty. For

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example

, summer can appear longer

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predicted, making water

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completely dry and the worst can lead to burning

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to adapt

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severe

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each year and those who can not survive will die and face

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extinction. There are

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problem, to make it not arise

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years later, all of the human in the

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needs to

be cooperated

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to tackle

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issues

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government

needs to produce more public transportation, and it will be more excellent if the vehicles are electric.

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mostly

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fueled using fossil

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which is bad for

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reason

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, the government and civil society need to replace it with renewable energy

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as wind and solar power

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kind of

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are

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sutainbility

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sustainable

energy

cause

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its main supply

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natural

sources

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. In conclusion, global warming is the main

reason

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for animals being

endagered

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endangered

and extinct.

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, citizens all around the

world

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need

collaboration

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with governments to

rise

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raise

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the

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awareness of

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global warming and its impact on our

live

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including animal’s life by

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to renewable energy

sources

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of

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to produce electricity and

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use

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public transportation

especially

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the

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electric vehicles

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