Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We can see the development from different sides.Develop

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usually offer dollars to developing

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.But the problem is not solved in the proper way and some argue to stop it and should give other help to the poor to reduce their poverty. I fully agree with

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essay.

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, most people in the world live in control of the economy

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their budget.But some

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like China,the USA,the UK,and Japan often give aid to others at any time because of their great income resources.But some of the government staff use that

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unethically.

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is the first reason, I did not agree with

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topic.Government officers use that

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for their necceceries and put some bills to show evidence of expenditure.

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,some people got approval to make a large complex with a lot of facilities and after we showed there was a small complex with low facilities.Most of the developing

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still developing, because of

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reason.Those liars do not give the whole aid that they have.

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,

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dollars come freely ,most of the government tries to get them and they do not try be earn. They always ask for some

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,like a beggar.Citizen do not try to export their items or do any other career ethically.

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, the poor do not try to become rich and they do not like to change their earning pattern.

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, it seems to me that,

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should not give

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, because of

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that

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not be distributed properly way. In conclusion, the poor do not change their behaviour regarding expenditure So giving technological knowledge, instruments and training about the whole of them and learning to earn

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and reduce their poverty without asking the hand of others , is the best thing.