The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol oil from

grain

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. There are 12 main stages in the manufacturing process, beginning with

grain

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being kept in storage and ending with two types of products provided to the feed or fuel market. The first step involves the storage of

grain

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in the warehouse,

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millling and cooking respectively. After that, the

grain

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experiences the stage of liquefaction. The solution

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the result of

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stage

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ferments in the tank with specialized instruments. The fuel ethanol is obtained by experiencing the course of distillation. Fuel ethanol which is a liquid can be put in big cans, after that it directly accesses the energy market.

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, the residual of the distillation process called “wet distillers

grain

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” is dried by means of an electric heater to become the solid substance known as “dry distillers

grain

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”.

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, it will come to the feed market as a product catering to nutritional needs.

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