The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The process details the steps by which smoked
fish
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is produced. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that smoking
fish
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can be divided into 3 main stages beginning with catching and transportation, followed by storage and processing, and
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further
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storage and transportation to
fish
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shops for retail. The process commences when
fish
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are caught in nets and
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transported by boat to a port. From
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point, they are frozen and
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later undergo a thawing process in
fresh water
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freshwater
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. The next stage is to slice open the
fish
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and put them in a salt water solution that
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contains some amount of yellow coloring
Following
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this
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, the actual smoking takes place. After smoking, the
fish
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are packaged in boxes and frozen at zero degrees centigrade in larger containers. They are
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grouped into cold storage bins and distributed by truck to shops to sell to consumers
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