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The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart provides
the
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apply
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information about the
process
 of producing
clothes
 from plastic bottles.
This
 is
man-made
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a man-made
the man-made
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process
 that
consist
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consists
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 of 2 main stages,
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which starts
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starts
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start
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 with
collect
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collecting
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 the plastic bottles and ends with rolling
it
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them
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 and
turn
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turning
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it
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them
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 out into
the
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apply
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clothes
. First of all, the main
process
start
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starts
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 with
transport
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transporting
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 the
bottle
 to the factories in order to start the
process
 of making
clothes
. The
bottle
being
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is
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 sorted by the
machine
 to pick the good quality to enter the cutting
processs
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process
 and clean it into the washing
machine
.
Moreover
, the
bottle
 is put under the sun to dry after being washed. The second
stages
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stage
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 starts with boiling the
bottle
 using the boil
machine
 to make sure that the
bottle
 is clear
from
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of
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 bacteria and ready to be
straining
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strained
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 into the yarn with various
color
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colors
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. The yarn is ready to make the rolling fabrics
by
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with
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 the help of
weaving
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a weaving
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machine
 and the
clothes
is
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are
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 ready to be produced.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, clothes, bottle, machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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