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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays the
milk
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production
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 in four nations in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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,
milk
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production
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 increased in Tanzania and Guatemala and decreased in Australia in these 2 decades,
whereas
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, the same in the Netherlands fluctuated over the years. First of all, the amount of
milk
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 that Guatemala used to produce was 26,000 litres in 1990, which increased by more than 50% in 2000 (55,000 litres) and the trend continued until 2010.
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, in 1990, Tanzania produced 87000 litres of
milk
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. In 2000, it rose to 1,42,000 and culminated at 1,55,000 in 2010.
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, Australia followed a downward direction in
milk
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production
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 from 1990 to the next 20 years. The amount was 11,246,000 in 1990, fell to 11,105,000 in 2000 and 9,165,000 in the following period.
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, the Netherlands experienced a fluctuation in
milk
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production
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 in these years. The amount of
milk
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 that was produced in
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 nation was 11,262,000 in 1990, which dropped to 11,155,000 in 2000 and
then
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, picked at 11,466,000 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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