THE GRAPH SHOWS THE INCOME OF FOUR CAFE IN NEW YORK OVER LAST YEAR

The line graph demonstrates the earnings of four

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of cafes in New York over the

last

year

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

whereas

the

tea

room

was plummeted

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, both

internet

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express, wi-fi

cafe

and

cafe

cool

was sharply increase

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over the period. In January, the

tea

room

begins at the highest income at about 160,000 dollars.

However

, right after that,

this

type of

cafe

witnessed a dramatic fluctuation. It reached a peak of almost 180,000 dollars in March. From October to the end of the

year

, the

Tea

room

was not the trend of people so it dramatically went down and dropped to

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lowest point at $50,000. In contrary to the

tea

room

type, we can see the development of three types remaining. In the first month of the

year

, Internet Express had the best income with $100,000. It varied insignificantly and ended the

year

with $140,000. Wifi

cafe

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a little bit lower when they began,

nevertheless

, we can experience a shoot up from $50,000 to $190,000 and become the most popular

cafe

of the given

year

. The final one,

Cafe

Cool hit the highest point of $120,000 in December.