The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map showed

two

sites where it is possible to build a new supermarket in a town.

Overall

, 

the

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site

number 2

demonstrates

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would

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that would

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be a lot

of

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apply

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better than

site

number 1, the main

raison

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reason

of

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for

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it is because

the

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site

2 is

the

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in the

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middle of the city,

while

another is localized on

countrysyde

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countryside

.  First

of

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to be observed that

site

2 is completely in the middle of town, where has

two

types of different lines passing through, as a railway and main roads. In

additional

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, it is around

of

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two

cities, there is a huge industry area and

finally

,

two

camps'

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housing. 

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,

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site

1 is outside of downtown, and between

of

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it, there is the road and railway which it could be easy

to

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for

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someone

how

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who

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is coming out or in from

job

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a job

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,

travel

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travelling

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,

another

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to another

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city or even just passing by. Because

this

position,

it

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can be of high

interisting

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interest

.

However

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it will turn really far to other cities. Clarity

the

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in the

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idea about

the

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site

2

become

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becomes

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more

attrative

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attractive

than

the

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site

1, especially because

of

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place can be a key to

sucess

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success

.