The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map showed
two
sites where it is possible to build a new supermarket in a town. Overall
, the
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apply
site
number 2 demonstrates
Verb problem
apply
would
be a lot Correct pronoun usage
that would
of
better than Change preposition
apply
site
number 1, the main raison
Correct your spelling
reason
of
it is because Change preposition
for
the
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apply
site
2 is the
middle of the city, Change preposition
in the
while
another is localized on countrysyde
.
First Correct your spelling
countryside
of
to be observed that Change preposition
apply
site
2 is completely in the middle of town, where has two
types of different lines passing through, as a railway and main roads. In additional
, it is around Replace the word
addition
of
Change preposition
apply
two
cities, there is a huge industry area and finally
, two
camps'
housing.
Change noun form
camps
On the other hand
, the
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apply
site
1 is outside of downtown, and between of
it, there is the road and railway which it could be easy Change preposition
apply
to
someone Change preposition
for
how
is coming out or in from Correct word choice
who
job
, Add an article
a job
travel
, Wrong verb form
travelling
another
city or even just passing by. Because Change preposition
to another
this
position, it
can be of high Correct pronoun usage
apply
interisting
. Correct your spelling
interest
However
it will turn really far to other cities.
Clarity Add a comma
However,
the
idea about Change preposition
in the
the
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apply
site
2 become
more Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
attrative
than Correct your spelling
attractive
the
Correct article usage
apply
site
1, especially because of
place can be a key to Change preposition
apply
sucess
.Correct your spelling
success
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, site with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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