You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents • say what action you want the post office to take

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great. My name is Tajinder Singh, and I applied for a job
last
week. So, I opted for your courier service to send my documents. I am writing
this
letter to let you know about those documents that I posted but have not delivered yet. I went to your Brampton branch on 22nd March to send some forms to Calgary. I put all my papers in a yellow envelope with the proper address on it. They
also
gave me a receipt which has details related to the delivery date. The reference number of my parcel is 1234WF1, and I attached the receipt with
this
letter.
Therefore
, it is my humble request to track my package as soon as possible and deliver it to its destination through express delivery service within two days because if it is not reached on time, I will lose
this
wonderful career opportunity. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours Faithfully, TS
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task response
Expand on the details of the situation and the impact of the missing documents to fully address the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
Use more varied linking words and cohesive devices to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.
lexical resource
Enhance your use of vocabulary by incorporating a wider range of formal and specific terminology related to postal services and document handling.
grammatical range
While the grammar and sentence structures are generally accurate, consider using more complex sentence structures and a wider range of grammatical structures to demonstrate a higher level of language proficiency.
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