You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents • say what action you want the post office to take

#documents #post #destination #office #manager #•give #situation #•describe #action

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great. My name is Tajinder Singh, and I applied for a job

last

week. So, I opted for your courier service to send my documents. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about those documents that I posted but have not delivered yet. I went to your Brampton branch on 22nd March to send some forms to Calgary. I put all my papers in a yellow envelope with the proper address on it. They

also

gave me a receipt which has details related to the delivery date. The reference number of my parcel is 1234WF1, and I attached the receipt with

this

letter.

Therefore

, it is my humble request to track my package as soon as possible and deliver it to its destination through express delivery service within two days because if it is not reached on time, I will lose

this

wonderful career opportunity. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours Faithfully, TS

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Sat Nov 11 2023

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Expand on the details of the situation and the impact of the missing documents to fully address the task requirements.

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Use more varied linking words and cohesive devices to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.

lexical resource

Enhance your use of vocabulary by incorporating a wider range of formal and specific terminology related to postal services and document handling.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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