The diagram below shows the development of the cutting tool in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of the cutting tool in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram compares the evolvement of the cutting instrument in the Stone Age from 1.4 million years ago to 0.8 million years ago.
Overall
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,
this
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special instrument has upgraded not only the size but
also
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the shape of the edges and the whole structure. On one hand, we can observe that tool A had a primitive look with the raw edges, which is not suitable for cutting.
Also
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, the shape of it is significantly similar to the raw stone rather than a device for cutting.
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, it is understandable
due to
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the lack of crafting supplies.
On the other hand
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, tool B has noticeably changed to an upgraded instrument with a sharp surface
in contrast
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to the rough surface of tool A. It is obvious that
this
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item, can easily used for cutting, and among the outlook, it enhanced and turns into a specific weapon with a sharp tip and a well-designed structure.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • development
  • cutting tool
  • Stone Age
  • summary
  • features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • introduction
  • description
  • evolution
  • different
  • conclusion
  • tool-making techniques
  • raw materials
  • sharpened edge
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • primitive
  • traditional
  • crafted
  • effective
  • efficient
  • significant
  • remarkable
  • noteworthy
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