57.The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic shows the
carbon
cycle
in nature.
Overall
, is around 6-step, natural and cycle
process, although
human factors also
affect the balance to complete the cycle
.
First of all, the energy from the sun is transformed into organic carbon
through a process in plants
known as photosynthesis. This
organic carbon
is then
transferred underground when plants
, and the animals that feed on them, die and decay and waste products. Furthermore
, some of this
carbon
is trapped underground in the form of fossils and fossil fuels.
Carbon
is also
released back into the atmosphere, however
, through various means. One is when animals and plants
respire, and another is when humans burn fossil fuels in cars and factories, and this
all causes the release of carbon
dioxide in the air. Finally
, all this
carbon
enters the atmosphere as CO2. It is then
reabsorbed by plants
and then
the cycle
begins again.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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