62.The bar chart shows the number of tourists in three nations who traveled to New Zealand in 1999 and 2009. The graph below shows the number of tourists who spent their holiday in two different ways. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph below illustrates the
number
of individuals who travelled from the UK, the US and Japan to New Zealand
in 1999 and 2009, in the second chart, shows the number
of visitors who spent their holiday in two different ways.
Overall
the number
of tourists from the United Kingdom and the United States increased while
Japanese decreased. The number
of individuals who spent their holiday backpacking rose moderately over the years while
the ones staying at resorts dropped steadily.
In 1999, there were 1,000,000 people
from the United Kingdom who went to New Zealand
, this
number
jumped to 1,600,000 in the next ten years, while
the US in 1999 had only 800,000 people
who visited New Zealand
, it almost doubled in 2009, with 1,500,000. Furthermore
, approximately 1,500,000 Japanese people
went to New Zealand
, but this
decreased to just over 1,100,000 in 2009.
Around 250,000 people
spent their holidays backpacking in 1999, this
grew modestly to 7,500,000 in 2004, and it continued rising significantly, ending the period with just over 1,000,000 individuals spending their holiday backpacking. Finally
, around 1,550,000 people
spent their holidays staying at resorts in 1999, this
climbed to just under 2,500,000 in 2004, but in the last
5 years it went down to just over 1,000,000.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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