62.The bar chart shows the number of tourists in three nations who traveled to New Zealand in 1999 and 2009. The graph below shows the number of tourists who spent their holiday in two different ways. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph below illustrates the
number
of individuals who travelled from the UK, the US and Japan to New Use synonyms
Zealand
in 1999 and 2009, in the second chart, shows the Use synonyms
number
of visitors who spent their holiday in two different ways.
Use synonyms
Overall
the Linking Words
number
of tourists from the United Kingdom and the United States increased Use synonyms
while
Japanese decreased. The Linking Words
number
of individuals who spent their holiday backpacking rose moderately over the years Use synonyms
while
the ones staying at resorts dropped steadily.
In 1999, there were 1,000,000 Linking Words
people
from the United Kingdom who went to New Use synonyms
Zealand
, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
jumped to 1,600,000 in the next ten years, Use synonyms
while
the US in 1999 had only 800,000 Linking Words
people
who visited New Use synonyms
Zealand
, it almost doubled in 2009, with 1,500,000. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, approximately 1,500,000 Japanese Linking Words
people
went to New Use synonyms
Zealand
, but Use synonyms
this
decreased to just over 1,100,000 in 2009.
Around 250,000 Linking Words
people
spent their holidays backpacking in 1999, Use synonyms
this
grew modestly to 7,500,000 in 2004, and it continued rising significantly, ending the period with just over 1,000,000 individuals spending their holiday backpacking. Linking Words
Finally
, around 1,550,000 Linking Words
people
spent their holidays staying at resorts in 1999, Use synonyms
this
climbed to just under 2,500,000 in 2004, but in the Linking Words
last
5 years it went down to just over 1,000,000.Linking Words
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