73.The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

73.The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
map
displays the Guten
park
in 2000. The
park
is large and with different areas in which individuals can enjoy their day. The
park
is an open area with different spaces, the entrance is just the south of the
map
. There are three different places in which there are seats, one is just at the left of the entrance, the other is near the right corner of the entrance, beside the fountain, and the
last
one is at the left of the exit, which is at the north of the
map
, and at the right of the exit there is a sculpture. At the southwest corner, there is a large, rectangular-shaped space which is a glasshouse, and just in front of it, it is the largest space of the
park
, which is a picnic area,
while
in the middle of the
map
, there is a small playground.
Finally
, in front of the fountain and at the left of the sculpture there is a pond for water plants.
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