78.Some people say economic growth is the onl way to end world poverty and hunger, while others say economic growth is damaging the environment and must stop. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some say that with the aim of ending poverty and hunger, the best way is to grow economically,

while

others would argue that economic

growth

causes

environmental problems and should be stopped.

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essay would argue that

although

economic

growth

can offer

people

jobs, it

causes

huge

damages

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in

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the planet. On the one hand, economic

growth

is crucial to ensure that

people

in the society have a source of income to buy their basic needs and ensure their safety, so they can live for a longer time. In

this

way, they do not

to

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worry about their situation for living, since they have a stable income and are able to face

unexpect

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situation

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. Recent research concluded that the unemployment rate is usually lower in countries which have prosperous economic

growth

.

However

, I believe that economic

growth

is not the only reason why poverty and hunger were reduced in some countries.

On the other hand

, economic

growth

causes

a number of negative effects

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the environment. Many companies for producing their product will cut down trees, causing deforestation.

Also

, some factories are working all 24 hours, so they can increase their goods,

this

releases carbon dioxide and other elements which

causes

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air pollution, as well, normally these buildings are situated near rivers will

also

contaminate it. All

this

causes

huge damage

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the environment which

lead

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to the disappearance of animals and new diseases.

For instance

, in the

last

decades

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new respiratory-related diseases

had

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been found, and the number of

people

with asthma

also

increased. In my opinion, economic

growth

causes

too much damage to the planet, and

this

causes

life danger to all living things in the world. In conclusion,

although

economic

growth

can ensure

people

to

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have a stable

job

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and be more secure about their surroundings, it

causes

environmental catastrophes like contamination, deforestation and animal extinction. I believe that economic

growth

is not the only way to stop poverty and hunger,

instead

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it brings

damages

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to the planet