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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
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The
town
 of Garlsdon map illustrates a new shop
that is
 planning to
built
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 for the
town
 and its two probable
location
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locations
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also
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are also
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 demonstrated.
Overall
, residential areas are at the north and south of the Garlsdon, and the
town
 centre is covered by the industrial zone. The first possible
location
 for the supermarket is
at
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in
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 the north-west in
countryside
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the countryside
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;
however
, the latter possibility is in the middle of the
town
 centre. The first estimated plan to
built
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build
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 a supermarket is
at
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in
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 the countryside between the railway and the
mainroad
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main road
at
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in
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 the
north-west
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northwest
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 of
the
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apply
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Garlsdon, where the population is 65,000 people.
This
location
 is around 12
kilometers
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to
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from
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 Hinton, where 12,000 people are living. The second estimated
location
 to
built
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 a shop is in the middle of the city centre which
covered
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is covered
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 by the industrial zone and housing areas located to the north and south. The distance from the planned
location
 for
shop
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the shop
a shop
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 to Bransdon, the
location
 populated
15,000
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by 15,000
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 individuals, is nearly 16
kilometers
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kilometres
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.
In addition
 to
this
, it
far
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is far
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 away from Cransdon, with a population of 29,000 people, approximately 25
kilometers
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kilometres
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, location with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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