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You have borrowed a book from your professor and returned it late write a letter to him why you delayed in returning the book and how useful the book was.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to apologise for not returning the
book
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 on
time
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 which I borrowed from you
last
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 week. I promise you to return
this
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book
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 as soon as possible after getting useful information from it. As you know, I have glassophobia and I discussed
this
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 problem with you. You recommended me to read books daily to increase my confidence. At that
time
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, you gave me your personal
book
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 named "You
become what you think
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Become What You Think
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" really beneficial for me. I read it every night before sleeping. But two days ago, one of my cousins was
also
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 visiting us after ages. I spent my most of
time
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 in doing shopping, eating out
restaurants
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at restaurants
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 and watching
cinema
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the cinema
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 late at night. At that
time
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, I completely forgot about the due date of returning
this
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book
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. I read the half
book
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 and it will take only two to three days to go through it. I hope you will understand me and are excited to see a sea change in me. I would really appreciate
if
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it if
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 you allow me some spare
time
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 to read
this
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book
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. I am looking forward to
hear
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hearing
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 back from you soon! Yours Faithfully, Sam.

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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to improve coherence.
task achievement
You might want to clarify how useful the book was with specific examples to enhance your task response.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and apologetic tone throughout, which is suitable for writing to a professor.
coherence cohesion
The use of a proper salutation and closing gives the letter a complete and professional feel.
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